| can you read my story ? will it make a good movie and tell if you think its a good start?

can you read my story ? will it make a good movie and tell if you think its a good start?

-_brokendreams-_ asked:


I sat in an alley hiding from whatever went on in the civilized world feeling like I deserved to be in a habitat with rats and garbage as I felt like I blended in with it all like camouflage. I didn’t know what my next move was now that I was no longer along side aiding a villain into bringing the world to a fuckin hell and destruction . I sat in that alley for hours with my head between my legs just thinking , crying, suffering from the aftermath of the shit I’ve done to people I even thought of committing suicide placing a gun to my head then thinking that it might be too painful I then switched to cutting my wrist I just never went along with none of it though . I knew I had to die soon somehow because I didn’t want to live with the guilt that I helped murder people but If I was meant to die today god would have let Earnest send me to my grave tortured just like those innocent victims we took out together, so what most of them were rich ignorant bastards.Thinking Back to reality and the current events that might have been happening and already happened , I knew Earnest would get desperate trying to escape the police riot in a getaway car waiting after the crime so I left him an easy escape and one final parting gift showing him that I was a good pupil. I made my way from the ground walking memorized by my life not paying attention to my present or future plots to add on to my timeline I just walk wherever my body would go with my mind clogged with sorrow my face covered with the expression of a drug addict surviving an overdose.
Dear Earnest “Rubber face” Redding :
I figured you never planned to kill the little girl , well I know you planned to but you wanted to see If I would go against you to save her and you knew I would. All of that “ You have 30 mins to get here “ shit was just a bluff , a killer’s way to make a crime scene more dramatic. So I took my time , you were on my watch. Haha, you’re going to love this J I rigged your getaway car with a bomb so 10 secs into your escape it shall send you to your final destination…hell..haha final destination I always knew how you were obsessed with violent movies so you based the crimes that we did together off of the characters. Final destination was my choice in killing you so if you get this letter you’re one lucky son of a bitch but if you don’t I guess things happen that cant save your ass …I doubt that you’ll get this letter because you’re in a rush and have no time or reason to look under the passenger’s seat that’s empty of me to warn you.
Sincerely ,
The killer’s Apprentice
P.S I learned from the best J
I don’t know If Earnest survived I just know that I would never go back to a life of crime. Why would I ? I had 21 million in cash. I was always about the money before the crime and the lifestyle , I never wanted to go down in history for famous crimes committed by a 21 year old kid and a 34 year old guy obsessed with crime using the kid as a sidekick and tutoring him along the way as they robbed , destroyed lives , and menaced there way around Hollywood ,California as some of the most memorable movie characters like Tony Montana and Manny , Batman and The Joker , Louie and Lestat aka Brad Pitt and Tom Cruise in “Interview with a Vampire”. I found myself waiting for god to punish me for all the shit I’ve done , so I lived life like it was my last day every chance I got, playing “Forever Young“ by Alphaville thinking of how Earnest played a song before we did our crimes that went along with the scenery , well I was waiting to be 21 forever. I sky dived thinking the parachute wouldn’t release and I would keep falling. I swam with sharks thinking which one will eat me but nothing ever went wrong for me. I bungee jumped on the way down smiling the whole way feeling like I was falling forever I visualized I was a bird flying holding my arms out like the scene in titanic where Jack goes “ I’m the king of the world!!“ but also thought god would make it so that the rope would snap on the way down but I was pulled back up laughing going “oh shit“ with excitement. I wanted to die that time the worst way I could , I was lonely , and had to live with guilt. I always thought why am I not dead yet ? I didn’t have the heart to take my own life so I was waiting for an accident to kill me. After awhile I found myself celebrating my 22nd birthday with friends and girlfriend at a local club in Hollywood.“ Hey Calvin a clown gave me this to give to you earlier.“ I received an anonymous gift In a box with a card dangling from it. “What ? A clown ? “ I smiled. “ You can open it , David.” I saw that he looked nervous. “ I mean its your–” I cut him off yelling . “ JUST OPENING THE FUCKING GIFT!” he slightly glistened with sweat from his forehead whipping it away with his leather jacket. “ Wait hold on a sec before you start” I said. I looked at my girlfriend Sasha sitting on the coach. “ go wait in the car I’ll be out and ready to leave and just a few.” “
dont give me any b.s about the grammar its just a rough draft. This isnt the beginning its the end kind. its about a young boy being taught about the life of crime by someone who’s a pro at it. they go around hollywood dressed as memorable movie characters..commiting crimes. He’s telling the point of view from his perspective on how he feels working for a criminal

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